A Cute Love Story...

Hai Friends,

I and my cousin Nimisha had made an imaginary Love story. The hero is myself. And have taken the situations from my life. This is purely imaginary one. Hope you people like it..

"I meet her on one of those busy Mondays of mine on the train, one look at her and I just fell for her , pretty cute , extremely softspoken. She got on to train from Thrissur. She was travelling on ladies compartment. When I got down at Ernakulam station i checked the ladies compartment. I was searching inside the train, peeping into it, hopeing to get a glance of her. And I bumped into a girl in front of me n she almost fell down. I grabed her by shoulder. I said "SORRY" and looked at her face and she was the same girl.. I was speech less..i just stared at her face. She said its ok and took her bag, gave a sweet smile to me and went. I stood there looking at her. She was walking to the stairs. when climbing thesteps she looked back and was surprised to see me standing there and watching her. She again smiled and went on her way.she had the prettiest smile on earth and I know I had fallen for her.

  Next monday, I reached Thrissur station little early, hoping to see her. I saw her waiting for the train with her friends. She saw me and smiled. Train came. We both got into it. At Ernakulam station, I got down and waited for her. She got down from train, saw me.She was alone this time, I went to her and u asked her some tongue-tied questions, she answered few.. She told me, she was working in a software firm at palarivattom.

Next monday, I saw her at thrissur station and she was alone. I went to her. We had some good chat untill the train came. When we reached ernakulam, it ws raining and as usual I had forgotten to take the umbrella. Seeing me getting wet she offered me to come under her umbrella.

The next monday saw her again this time she was in this pink dress. she looked so pretty with a little bindi…She smiled at me…I smiled back and started asking some of the stupidest questions, her name was…AVNI, she does up down every Monday . She is staying in a hostel at palarivattom.

   This procedure continued for 3-4 weeks. we strtd to travel along.. we both used to get on to the same compartment.. We will get on to the train, then find some corner.. sit/ stand there and used to talk till we reach Ernakulam.. I also got her number and used to call her frequently.

On one monday she was not seen at Thrissur station.. I checkd the whole station, but she ws not seen.. I got on the train and reached Ernakulam.. I searched for her the whole platform. I tried her mobile, it ws ringin but she didnt pick the phone.. Igrew tensed. I waited in the station for the next trains to come.. Then I finally went ot office, 2 hrs late. I was very much worried. As I know where she works, I took off on that day and went to her company with my friend.I went there and security wont allow us in as we dnt hav ny identiy card or any appoinment. so we waited outside the building till noon. At noon some people came out for lunch. I stopped 1 and asked for her, he said, he dont know her, but introduced me to their HR. I askd her abt Avni.she said, avni was absent that day and dont know much details.. she said, she will ask her friend, who is working in the same firm to come and meet me.. and she went in..

Her friend came.. she asked who I was, n i told her my name and she recognised me.. she said, Avni was sick.. she had got viral fever and left to her hom on friday.. In the hurry she had forgottn her mobile which is now at her hostel.. Avni doesnt know my number as the number is in her mobile..she den gave me Avni's home number..I called her home.. But she ws not there.. Their servent had answred the phone..she said Avni is in hospital.. I asked, in which hospital Avni is and she named a hospital at thrissur.. I started immediately to thrissur.. straight away I went to the hospital.. I rchd there by 4 PM.

It was visitors time.. I went to reception and asked for Avni.. They gaev me her room number.. I went there, and she was laying in the bed, with her mom by her side.. As I went in, Avni was surprised.. she introduced me to her mom as her collegue.. I enquired about her health to her mom.. Mom said, she wil get discharged within 2 days and can com to office next week after getting some rest..Then her mom said, she has to get some medicines and she askd me to be there until she returns and she left. As she left avni askd, how and why you came.. I told to her the whole story.. she was surprised and sad, as she made me worried. I said its ok. I enquired how she is and hows she feeling now [the usual stuffs] Then I said, 'I have a train at 5 to Ernakulam, and I have to catch it. Tell your mom, I left' n I stood Up and was about to leave, she held my hands. I turned to her n looked at her. she said "I LOVE U.." bang.... I was shocked and surprised..I stood there with an opened mouth.. Before I can say anything more, her mom came.. She gave me a beautiful and naughty smile. I said bye to both of them and left.."

So currently my story is upto this.. I'l add the continuation as soon as i get the rest. Hope you guys liked it.. Feel free to comment on the story.. about its mistake and what you think about the story and about our creativity.